>>57634460
The starter is cute, and the mid evo is alright. But the main problem is the last stage: the design is too jarring.

>1: real world reference
IIRC, the idea was a man who was part bird from the waist down. Good. So why isn't he some form of centaur? That would make it look better, instead of the feather pants and giant ass he has.
>2: theming
He is supposed to be a capoeira fighter. I don't get why since the game is Spain, not Portugal, but whatever. This isn't a bad idea, Oriloco showed you can have dancing birds, and is cool.
But when I look at it, my head doesn't go "oh wow, he is going to do crazy leg moves". To me, he looks more like he is posing. I know is 3D and poses are a thing, but he looks more "looks over practicity"
>Vibe
He is fucking gay, and not in a good way. I know he is supposed to be flamboyant, magnifique, and probably with an ego bigger than Meowscarada's jealosy. But the way he moves and act... he is just fucking gay, like the biggest caricature of a gay man you can imagine is focused on him.
An actual homosexual would walk up to him, look at him emote, and he would say "you are fucking gay, dude."

If I were to make it, either it would look like the road runner from the Looney Toons, make the legs like actual bird legs so the lower half makes more sense, or something like >>57634964 (small and rotund so it can have an ego bigger than Empoleon and wanting to show off).

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How did this entire line flop so badly? Not even the pre-evos seem to be liked overall.