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Anon, I got SUPER sick the day after I replied, and I'm still recovering from the sickness. I'm just about better, but help me out here, anons. Improvements for this Skullcrusher Mountain ponification?
>Canterlot Mountain
Welcome to my friendship dungeon on Canterlot Mountain
I hope that you've enjoyed your stay so far
I see you've met my student Twilight
Her appearance is quite disturbing
But I assure you she's friendly enough
She's a sweetheart, calls me teacher
And she has a way of finding pretty things
And bringing them to me

Oh, and I'm so into you
But I'm way too kind for you
Even my guardsponies think I'm crazy
I'm not surprised that you agree
If you could find some way to be
A little bit less afraid of me
You'd see the memories of my sister
From inside my head say I shouldn't banish you yet

I made this half-dragon, half-breezie pastry to please you
But I get the feeling that you don't like it
What's with all the screaming?
You like dragons, you like breezies
Maybe you don't like pastries so much
Maybe I used too many breezies
Isn't it enough to know that I ruined a dragon
Baking a treat for you?

Oh, and I'm so into you
But I'm way too kind for you
Even my guardsponies think I'm crazy
I'm not surprised that you agree
If you could find some way to be
A little bit less afraid of me
You'd see the memories of my sister
From inside my head say I shouldn't banish you yet

Picture the two of us alone out on my golden balcony
While up above the land, my suntouched horn ignites and guides the dawn
And all the ponies who lead their peaceful lives may find it quite magical
Well, it won't mean half as much to me if I don't have you here

No, it isn't easy living here on Canterlot Mountain
So maybe you could cut me just a little slack
Would it pain you to be civil?
I've been patient, I've been gracious
And this mountain is covered with bats
Hear them eee'ing, such hungry ponies
Maybe you should stay and have another drink
And think about me and you

Oh, and I'm so into you
But I'm way too kind for you
Even my guardsponies think I'm crazy
I'm not surprised that you agree
If you could find some way to be
A little bit less afraid of me
You'd see the memories of my sister
From inside my head say I shouldn't banish you yet

I shouldn't banish you yet
I shouldn't banish you yet

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