>>41038567
>but I'm certainly not THAT wrong. I hope?
No, you're right for once, despite your flag indicating your poor taste.
>Clearly, conflicting with my headcanon is the most severe offense a fic could commit.
On that we can agree.
>>41038578
>somepony makes a slightly different random choice, which results in a slightly different outcome
But that's FUN.
>you've known these ponies for twelve hours but the magic decided that you're BFFs now
Which is an artefact of the NMM plot originally being meant as an entire season's plot, IIRC.
>Burning down the orphanage
I actually had to double check her comics issue to make sure. The orphanage burning is in a different MLP comic, and I was getting them mixed up for a moment. She does have very fiery magic in her own comic though.
>>41038594
Hey, you didn't even join the other club.
>gif
Based. I'd shill a fic of mine but it's nohooves.
>I just checked the rating and it's not what I expected
Opening with a character death probably bumps it past E; the show would never do that.
>we ended the week on the biggest idiot ball moment it seems like
But I thought the orb was supposed to be Celestia's.
>The real question is did was Granny Smith still there at the beginning?
Besides your mid-sentence stroke, we actually get an answer. She probably wasn't, but the Apples were indeed around since near the start.
>>41038610
Understandable.
>>41038642
>Does Luna love apples?
DYEWTS?
>>41038670
>No, surely not.
Agreed, this is pretty far from what a fixfic is and never feels like one.
>>41038689
>the siren one
I didn't particularly like how they just stumbled onto the solution on first try, but it's an overall good chapter aside from that. I really liked the underwater scene. I wrote underground by accident. I'm tired.
>>41038704
>they've been offline since February.
February of last year, anon. 14 months. It's time to let go.
>>41038720
>the feeling that Equestria just has unlimited resources
I feel that's in line with canon, but I know this also strokes your kinks.
>>41038831
>The fic would be vastly improved by a scene or two in which Luna does something decidedly un-Celestia-like
But there's plenty of those already. I feel like you're mixing up your canon and fanon Celestias.
>The problem is that they also make sense for Celestia to do
See, this. It doesn't matter that 'it makes sense'. That's not what canon Tia is like.
>That is absolutely wasting the potential of this AU
You're not wrong on this, though, but the fic you want is simply not the fic this wants to be. By all means Twilight shouldn't even have been born with a change this big this far back. But I like the idea that destiny is immutable around Luna, and I like the story this fic decides to tell with its premise.

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